“...Will leans down and kisses me on the cheek. On the same spot as where Jake kissed me. I feel this odd territorial feeling and a flash of anger towards Will. Annoyed that he’s just erased Jake’s kiss.”
Okay, lack of editing aside, this is fucking bullshit. Will is her BOYFRIEND and she’s pissed because…WUT? Gee, I can’t wait to read some more about this enormous thundercunt of an MC.